Thursday, December 13, 2012

Hyunmin One Shot Story - J & M Love Story - part 2

From Previous Post.....




"Miss, wait......I'm sorry but I can't let you go in that condition.  If something happens to you, my conscience will haunt me for the rest of my life so, please allow me to keep you company or maybe, if you want, we can stay at the park until you feel  better."  Jihoo was a bit worried that the girl might just ignore him and leave.

The girl just looked at him emotionless with tears in her eyes.  After a few minutes, she got out of the car and walked without uttering a single word.  

Jihoo was surprised with her actions and it took him awhile before he managed to move and followed her....

At the park, the girl sat on the bench with her head down.  Jihoo on the other hand, didn't know what to say or what to do as the girl didn't say anything. 

"What happened to this girl?  Why did she cry?  Is she unable to speak?"  He felt sadness and pain in his heart seeing the girl look so lonely and sad.  "Why do I feel this way?  I feel so different with this girl.  I had this kind of feelings with my best friend and now feeling it again but this time, it's for this girl."

Jihoo can no longer take her silence so he told her, "I'll get us something to drink please stay here... I'll be right back."



Jihoo left her and went to the nearest cafe. On his way back, he saw the girl from afar still sitting on the bench doing something on the ground...

"Hopefully, you'd speak to me now... I can't help you if you choose to remain quiet".  I want to hear your voice... please speak to me."  Jihoo said to himself.


The girl looked up to Jihoo when he handed her the cup of coffee.  He took the opportunity to introduce himself, "By the way, my name is Jihoo!" 

Will the girl also take the opportunity to introduce herself?



Author: Mhel
Co-author: YJJ

73 comments:

  1. Hello GF Mhel...

    Waaaahhh... JH had a change of heart as soon as he saw the sad face girl! The fire man's heart is on fire for this new girl.

    Please GF, I am begging you, work on part 3 already!!!!

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    1. Hi Gf Snowy! Part 3? Gosh, you're so demanding, Lol.... You are like Kiddo now...

      Jihoo sunbae is not a tortuga here, you hear me Gf Cyni?

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    2. Whoa, the Jihoo here is not a Tortuga (turtle)... Waaaaa..... he better stop staring at her and give her a wet kiss already. hahahhahaha

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    3. Hahaha, he dont even know her name and already a wet kiss...lol, you made my day Gf....

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    4. Tsk... why not GF Mhel, have you heard of.... kiss now and ask later? hahahaha

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    5. Nyahahaha,.kiss now ask later is awesome!

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  2. finally a girl for Jihoo kekekeke.....

    she ring the bell in your heart right Jihoo? lalalalala

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    1. Yes, it's about time for Jihoo to have a girl just for him. Woohooo...

      Common Jihoo, make this ann interesting fanfic for Christmas...

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  3. Good Morning/afternoon/Evening GFs...
    Thanks Gf Mhel for the second part of your one shot story...
    Part 3 pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee... hahaha

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    1. Aigoo, also you want tge part 3 soon Gf Rowshe....good morning to you too....

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    2. Hello GF rowshe... good morning to you!

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  4. GForce are becoming scriptwriter and director now...

    so HyunMin....just wait for a new drama/film from PaMi soon.....kekekekeke

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    1. We need a producer Baby, Michy! Hahaha

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    2. Hahhahahha.... are we?

      Oh gosh what else will this 2 make us do. My husband has been laughing at my craziness. He told me that he never expected from someone like me to be crazy with Asian celebrities like this. I quickly replied, I am only crazy for 2 and that is HJ and MM; my first and last!

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    3. why dont we ask Papi to be producer...kekekeke

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    4. Don't worry, if I win a lottery, I'll produce it. hahaha

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    5. ok CEO of GFOrce production house....kekekekeke

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    6. Poor husbands, their wives are all gone crazy to Hyunmin.

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    7. If I win the lottery...
      I'm going to produce the PK season 2... Hyunmin has already a writer, director,production staff what else... hahaha

      dream on rowshe!!!!

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    8. Sorry Gf Snowy... I didn't see your post... we think the same idea... hahaha

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    9. Hopeboth of your wishes will come true....hahaha...for sure Hyunmins are all happy...

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    10. Yes, let's pray that I and GF Rowshe will win the lottery so we can put these lovely couple in a drama again!!!

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  5. Good Evening Gf Michily... How are you?

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    1. hi GF Rowshe! i am fine, alive & kicking kekekeke

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  6. This story is getting more interesting.... another update gf Mhel...pleaseeee!!!!!

    Yes, Jihoo is not a Tortuga.... good for you Jihoo!!!

    Good morning/evenings girls!!

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    1. Jihoo... just kiss the girl!!!... yif you don't do that... you will be a Tortuga again!

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    2. Hola Gf Cyni! How's your trip?

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    3. Hi Mhelcita... my trip was awesome... 4 days of sunny days and the beach.

      Something scary happened to me... my hubby wanted to do sea kayak... so he convinced me to join the "fun"... so, we were crossing the waves in the kayak and then a big wave came and "R$%$%#%&#%&#!!!... I was under the sea...

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    4. Its good that you are safe Gf...but for sure its also a good experience for you.

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    5. Hahahaha... yes!!... I want to do it again!!!

      Gf... I wanna know why Monae is crying???... huhuhu... Jihoo should hug her!

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    6. Jihoo, should kiss her now so she will forget whatever made her cry. Hahahah

      My guess why she is crying, her father cut her credit cards for overspending. Hahhaha

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    7. Hello Nievecita...

      hahaha... I think she's crying because Gf Yoonjita's credit card was denied, so now, they can't do shopping together

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    8. Hahaha even me dont know why she is crying...lol....

      Gf Yjj, you give her a closed credit card? Oh no,.why, why,.wh? Hahaha

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    9. Hahahahha.... Her Ninang YJJ, her shopping partner has a problem with her card? hahahahaha...uh-oh!

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  7. Holaaa Gfs !! Buenos Dias ^^

    I love this oneshot of Monae and Jihoo sumbae <3 .. talking of Jihoo .. BOF already ended. No more Jihoo (on TV, of course hahaha)

    PS:Monae is crying for.... NG Sunbae Nim ? =(

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    1. Hola Mary!!!

      We don't know why Monae is crying... only gf Mhel knows it.

      You can still watch Jihoo on YT!!.. :)

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    2. Hola Gf Mary, you can rewatch it in Yt....let's see why she cried on tge next episode... ^^

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    3. Hola Mary, what's up!

      BOF Jihoo story ended and resumed in GForce Blog. hahahaha...

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    4. Gf Snowy, NG is Kim Nam Gil in Bad Guy...

      Jihoo disappeared because Monae needs him....hahaha

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    5. she meant Kim Nam Gil i guess..

      hola Mary!!!!!! :D

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    6. she meant Kim Nam Gil i guess..

      hola Mary!!!!!! :D

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    7. Oh, okay Kim Nam Gil.... the Ahjussi!

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    8. HOLA CYN, HOLA MHEL, HOLA SNOWY, HOLA MAZZY!!!! ^^
      Hola GFs!!!

      I disappeared because I was washing my clothes .. I just finished

      well whatever the reason for her sadness .. already has her future fireman beside her to warm her .. uuuuyyyy >///< jajajajajaja

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  8. What a nice story,part 3 asap! So demanding hhehe
    I am so envy to those who can write a stories. Why i was born without that kind talent? but hmmm..maybe i can learn from you guys...

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    1. Hahaha, Gf Eiren i dont have a writing skills too that's why i need an editor...lol

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    2. Hahaha... like I said before, HJ and MM will make us do the impossible. There's nothing to learn, just do it. GF Mhel, never did it before and look, this is her second Hyunmin one shot.

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    3. GFs influence me a lot Gf Eiren, plus the Hyunmin love....

      Aigoo Gf Snowy, you dig that skills in me...hahahaha....

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    4. Glad that I did GF Mhel. wooohooo... No stopping now for you girl!

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    5. Oh well, when i started making fanvids, i dont know anything either, but i love these two and wanted to come out with my own video so i searched online and learned. But making a story is a lot different, you need to dig your emotions, build story in your head and put it into words. I may have stories in my head but putting it into words is another story. If you know what i mean, i'm sucks! Haha...

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    6. Stil depends on my mood Gf Snowy, hehehe..

      Gf Eiren,.just do what's on your mind...Gfs can help you...we also help each other here in our post..

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    7. Eiren, why don't you start here, just do it. FYI, we have a very good scriptwriter and editor in our group...her name is Yoonji Joong (YJJ)...hahaha

      Mhel is right. We help each other here. So keep that in mind.

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    8. Hi Eiren... yes we can help you... Gf Mazzy is the fanart expert... I do some too... if you need help just let us know!!.

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    9. Wow, what's in here are really a nice group of people. Hmm, let's see.... i'm not really into writings but maybe i can give it a try " in a very far away future" haha... i just borrowed khj words.

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    10. Yes we are a very nice group.

      You borrowed HJ's words, the words which he actually meant, in the near future. Hahahaha

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  9. ohh hola gfs!! ommo!! i almost miss the fun in here hahahah yah yah yah i know
    the reason why monae is crying.. bcos... off me.. monae can live without me hahaha i am her oxygenn! hahhahah


    mommy mhel.. part 3 i need that!!!!! haha pronto!!! i dont like cliff hanger! hahaha

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    1. Kidoo, now i remember why she cried....you know why? Because she was very disappointed to you that you put flour instead of icing powder in your dough nut....hahahaha

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    2. aishhhh mommy mhel!!! haha thats an embarassing fact! hahaha the doughnut is a gift for monae.. but then yeea.. you know what happen to it.. hahahahaha yah dont tell jihoo that im the one who made her cry.. ill be dead! LoL

      part 3 pronto mmmmooommyyyy ! haha

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    3. aishhhh mommy mhel!!! haha thats an embarassing fact! hahaha the doughnut is a gift for monae.. but then yeea.. you know what happen to it.. hahahahaha yah dont tell jihoo that im the one who made her cry.. ill be dead! LoL

      part 3 pronto mmmmooommyyyy ! haha

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    4. Kidoo, next time read first before using it....lol..you're the only Crazy Mazzy ever.....

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    5. hhahaha Crazzy Mazzy.. i miss using that name hahaha yes mommy mhel.. noted! hahaha

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    6. hhahaha Crazzy Mazzy.. i miss using that name hahaha yes mommy mhel.. noted! hahaha

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  10. GF Mhel, dear author... I want a grand Jihoo_Monae wedding, okay.

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    1. And a hot honeymoon after ..lol

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    2. haha and then.. the product is a dozen kids for them! hahahahah

      hola eiren! i am GF Mazzy! olala! wow you are interested in making story also? ahaha for your information.. gforce also has one fanfic in asianfanfiction about HyunMin.. and mine has two.. hhehe.. i think you will be more inspired to write story aftr you visit that site.. where all gforce members met and united :D

      anyway.. where do you come from? :D :D :D

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    3. haha and then.. the product is a dozen kids for them! hahahahah

      hola eiren! i am GF Mazzy! olala! wow you are interested in making story also? ahaha for your information.. gforce also has one fanfic in asianfanfiction about HyunMin.. and mine has two.. hhehe.. i think you will be more inspired to write story aftr you visit that site.. where all gforce members met and united :D

      anyway.. where do you come from? :D :D :D

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    4. Oh no, what an early morning greetings, a demand of a grand qedding and a very hot honeymoon... Take it slow Gfs, they dont know each other yet...lol

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  11. Hi GFs!!! Agree that Mhel should write part 3 ASAP...don't wanna sound demanding Mhel, but Ilove for you to update more often than once a week...the GForce is so creative in writing Hyunmin fanfics!!!...LOL...so much topics to browse thru...

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    1. Aigoo,.Ate you're asking for part 3 too? Hehehe... Thank you for the compliments Ate Liz...

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