Saturday, October 5, 2013

♡♥ Poem: AS IF I WISH I COULD ♥♡

By:  A40Santos39

As if I could escape this world.

As if I could think for myself.

As if every step I take, is calculated by everyone around me.

As if these four walls have become my life.

As if I could run to you freely.

As if I could.

As I wish you could be free. 

As I wish I could take away your pain.

As I wish to protect you.

As I wish to escape this world with you.

As I wish to hold you.

As I wish I could break the walls around you.

As I wish you could run to me.

As I can only wish to be free with you.

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56 comments:

  1. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 1:34 AM

    Thank you for the beautiful poem, GF A. More, more, more please?!?

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    1. NbratzsOctober 5, 2013 at 5:33 AM

      YJJ, Thank You!! and Thank you for posting it. U r Cool!!

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    2. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 11:54 AM

      You're welcome Gf A. Sorry it took awhile because as I read your poem over-and-over, the words affected my emotion "as if I wish I could" help them with all the hardship and trials they're going through. (Just being a typical 'Ate' to them). hehehe

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    3. NbratzsOctober 5, 2013 at 12:04 PM

      YJJ that's cool!! Hehehe!!

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  2. MhelOctober 5, 2013 at 1:40 AM

    Woah, Gfs are so talented!

    Very nice poem Gf A, hope more to come from you

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  3. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 1:45 AM

    Omo....daebaaak...gomawo GF A..,
    very romantis....love this couple
    give me more..more and more....
    Make me crazy thinking about this couple ,...love forever...miss them oppa hyun joong with minmin ah...

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  4. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 2:05 AM

    What such a beautiful poem, thank you GF A.^^

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  5. rowshe10October 5, 2013 at 2:20 AM

    Thank you so much Gf A for a wonderful poem. Love it ♡♥♡

    Thanks Yjj for posting :)

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  6. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 2:37 AM

    Happy Saturday GFs!!!
    What a beautiful poem GF A, thank you for sharing !

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  7. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 2:49 AM

    A beautiful sad poem of a longing heart of HJ to be freely do the things for his love. If only I could be a fairy whom can grant his wish. How great it would be.

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    1. NbratzsOctober 5, 2013 at 5:46 AM

      GF Retta That's it you got it from HJs part of the poem. Thank You!!! :D :D

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    2. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 7:54 AM

      On the other hand, Mm has so many wishes and desires to freely show his love for HJ but she is constraint. Very nice poem GF A. You captured the feelings of both longing how much they want to show to the world the love they had for each other but could not do it. We obviously know why.

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    3. NbratzsOctober 5, 2013 at 8:44 AM

      GF Retta. Is 2 people's desire to do what's on their mind. With out judgment! In a world in which there is judgment by others the longing for freedom is a desire.
      Very cool ah?
      Thank You!!! <3

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  8. BescacaOctober 5, 2013 at 4:52 AM

    Heard that Min Min is going to have a short drama in KBS 2.

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    1. MhelOctober 5, 2013 at 5:09 AM

      Really Gf? Good to hear that. Where did you get the info Gf?

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    2. NbratzsOctober 5, 2013 at 5:52 AM

      Gf Bescaca. Really

      What?
      When?
      Where?
      Who? = MM

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    3. BescacaOctober 5, 2013 at 6:12 AM

      with actor Kim Ji Suk, will be broadcasted in the early of Nov this year. It should be a single-unit drama (KBS Special Drama). I could see the Chinese Title only. I try to translate it in English but not sure…… something like 'Breathe of Romance ---You are the Star to come to me' that us the Chinese I can understand and make it in English for all GF for reference.O(∩_∩)O

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    4. MhelOctober 5, 2013 at 6:17 AM

      Maybe you can give us the innk Gf mso thar the other GFs can help up when they wakes up.

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    5. BescacaOctober 5, 2013 at 6:20 AM

      http://t.cn/zR2XEmm

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    6. NbratzsOctober 5, 2013 at 6:28 AM

      GF Bescaca
      Thank You for the link and info!! Yey!!! Uhuuu!!

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    7. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 6:52 AM

      Wuaaah thank you GF bescaca
      min min new project...
      Iam love it...

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    8. emdzNYOctober 5, 2013 at 8:50 AM

      Waaaaah.... MM in a new drama! This news is wonderful. Thank you GF Bescaca for sharing and alerting the HyunMins with this happy news!!!!!

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  9. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 6:21 AM

    Hi GF Bescaca! MM in a drama ! That will be fantastic... and Kim Ji Suk, he is the actor that was a guest with MM in Strong heart...

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    1. BescacaOctober 5, 2013 at 6:23 AM

      yes, that is him.

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    2. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 6:27 AM

      This is wonderful GF ! I am so excited to see MM again in a show. Thank you very much for sharing!

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  10. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 6:30 AM

    what a beautiful poem.... so touching. good job GF A.
    great to hear that MM will be in new drama. thanks GF Bescaca.

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  11. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 7:02 AM

    MM and kim ji suk...he is the otheR man in PERSONAL TASTE?

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  12. Cyn OCOctober 5, 2013 at 8:13 AM

    OMG, Beautiful poem gf A!!. So perfect for our couple!!

    Thank you Gf.

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  13. emdzNYOctober 5, 2013 at 8:44 AM

    OMG, this poem is so beautiful. Goosebumps alert!!!! I already read this yesterday; reading it again for the second time, still has the same effect on me. This a heart melting poem.! Great job A. I give you a 5 star rating on this one!!!!!

    Thanks for sharing it with your fellow Hyunmins.

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    1. emdzNYOctober 5, 2013 at 8:45 AM

      HJ should contact you to write his songs A....

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    2. NbratzsOctober 5, 2013 at 8:48 AM

      GF Snowy!! Hahaha!! Goosebumps Alert!!! Thank You Snowy!!!
      <3 <3

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    3. NbratzsOctober 5, 2013 at 8:55 AM

      Snowy. If HJ contacts me writing will be the last thing on my mind. Hahahaha! I think the words past out!! comes to mind. LOL!!

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    4. emdzNYOctober 5, 2013 at 8:55 AM

      Hahaha you can unglue your mouth through your poems A.

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    5. NbratzsOctober 5, 2013 at 9:02 AM

      GF Snowy. oh men!! I unglued my mouth again. Gosh darn it. That's probably because I ran out of Superglue!!!
      Hahahahaha!

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    6. emdzNYOctober 5, 2013 at 9:05 AM

      I like it when you unglue you mouth Gf... Keep away from Superglue!!!! Hahaha

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  14. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 8:50 AM

    Good am/pm Dear Gfs. I love your poem Thanks for share with us...Gf A

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  15. emdzNYOctober 5, 2013 at 8:56 AM

    Happy Saturday everyone .....

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  16. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 8:58 AM

    Good am/pm Dear Gfs. I love your poem Thanks for share with us...Gf A

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  17. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 11:44 AM

    Beautiful poem Gf A... HyunMin couple express their feeling !!!
    Love it Gf A.....

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  18. UnknownOctober 5, 2013 at 7:58 PM

    Hola GFs!!!! Whoaaa GF A! I love the poem so much!!!!! I want more! *Demanding* hahahahahahahaha

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  19. UnknownOctober 6, 2013 at 1:32 AM

    That was beautiful! :) How I wish they can freely express their love to the world.

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  20. itsjaney_06October 6, 2013 at 9:07 AM

    a love so pure yet not so free...a love that can stand the test of time, the test of society....

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  21. itsjaney_06October 6, 2013 at 10:11 AM

    Thanks A :)

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