Monday, May 20, 2013

GForce Categorical Contest #4: Entry No. 3

 
Best HyunMin One-shot
Entry No. 3
Title:  Hourglass
Author:  Cielito














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  1. Cyn OCMay 20, 2013 at 3:40 PM

    Thanks for the story Cielito!

    Huhuhu, this story made me cry. Can we have part 2?, I mean HJ was dreaming right?. He needs to wake up and kiss his girl JSM.

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  2. AnonymousMay 20, 2013 at 4:08 PM

    part 2! part 2!! their continuation on the other life.. wahaha

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    1. Cyn OCMay 20, 2013 at 4:16 PM

      hahahaha.

      We are waiting for the part 2 of your oneshot Ms. BS16!!

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    2. AnonymousMay 20, 2013 at 4:49 PM

      what? no.. let's just wait for the part 2 of the other stories.. forget that you've ever read mine

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    3. Cyn OCMay 20, 2013 at 4:51 PM

      Your story is unforgetable!!

      *everybody with me!*
      Part 2!! Part 2!! Part 2!!!!!!
      Part 2!! Part 2!! Part 2!!!!!!
      Part 2!! Part 2!! Part 2!!!!!!
      Part 2!! Part 2!! Part 2!!!!!!

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    4. emdzNYMay 20, 2013 at 5:24 PM

      Okay.hahahaha

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  3. MhelMay 20, 2013 at 4:14 PM

    This one is sad..huhuhu

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  4. emdzNYMay 20, 2013 at 4:18 PM

    I too was Geary after reading the story.

    Part 2... Hyun Joong meets the identical twin sister... Oh Hani..... Please Cielito, please make Hyun Joong happy.

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  5. NbratzsMay 20, 2013 at 6:28 PM

    #4 entry #3

    * * * * * Stars

    although very sad it was good story.

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  6. mi7chimesMay 20, 2013 at 10:10 PM

    omg! I was expecting it... But it still came out without notice *teary eyed*

    I was thinking she was being selfish calling him boyfie at the last moments hugging him... But then i thought... She was alone all this while, n when she was about to go... She had a chance at happiness and love.. N she took it... It was not selfish... It was love... N he deserved to know her true feelings too.. No? Nice one. Like her I want him to find another girl n snowy has the perfect idea! Pls pls pls....

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  7. UnknownMay 20, 2013 at 11:47 PM

    sad but beautiful..*sniff*
    4 stars

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  8. MhelMay 23, 2013 at 12:22 AM

    4 stars.....

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  9. kimjung25May 24, 2013 at 11:29 AM

    Hello Gfs....

    Sorry for the late reply....Thank you GFs for the good comment.I want to give all the credit to my 15 years old daughter,she is the one who wrote this.She use only my email address to sent her story on Gforce.

    Part 2....maybe....it depends.....but we have the idea how the story goes on part 2..:)

    Thank you again...

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    1. MhelMay 24, 2013 at 11:51 AM

      Oh hi Gf, how nice...your daughter is amazing, her writing skills is really good. Keep it up and im looking forward for the part 2...

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    2. Cyn OCMay 24, 2013 at 12:41 PM

      Hola KJ25!!.

      Thanks for the one shot. Well thanks to your daughter. She is very talented.

      Part 2!!!! Part 2!!! Part 2!!!!!! We want Part 2!!!!

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    3. AnonymousMay 26, 2013 at 9:44 AM

      @kimjung25.. is this who I think it is? TITA C?! wohoooo!!! long time no chat.. yes, tell your daughter, please.. part 2!!! part 2!!!!

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